Wednesday, October 22, 2008

Animal Farm Question Paragraph

Napoleon has all the makings of a dictator, concerned only with himself, instilling fear inthe animals, giving them no choice but to follow his lead by acts of intimidation, their only option being compliance.First, the animals take over the farm, they think it is the start of a better life. “The animals were happy as they had never conceived it possible to be. Every mouthful of food was an acute positive pleasure, now that it was truly their own food, produced by themselves and for themselves, not doled out to them by a grudging master.” However, Napoleon slowly transforms into Mr. Jones, but far more corrupt than Jones had ever been. Secondly, Napoleon is a bully and a tyrant and hungers for control, having a reputation for getting his own way. He is eventually overcome by greed and soon becomes power-hungry. He announced that in the future all questions relating to the farm would be settled by a special committee of pigs.” Lastly, Napoleon’s true side shows through after he slaughters many animals who plotted against him. He had confiscated nine puppies, training them to be police dogs that act as his security guards. Not only are they given special privileges, they also act as executioners, tearing out the throats of animals that confess to treachery. Napoleon’s method of “getting his own way” involves a combination of propaganda and terror. His final act of propaganda is changing the Seventh Commandment to “All animals are equal, but some are more equal than others.” The animals had no choice but to believe Napoleon’s lies because any means of protest against a dictatorship would surely have disastrous, if not deadly, results.

1 comment:

Constitution Melville said...

Beautifully written paragraph and much more clearly organized than the last one. Excellent conclusion sentence. It really leaves that final punch of meaning for your reader.

As always, be careful not to let yourself get so swept up in the language that you lose sight of your point. For example, I'm not totally sure how your first yellow relates to why it's Napoleon's fault that the pigs rose to power. The quote there seems a little extraneous (not necessary).